Story Notes for "Traces of Us"
My latest story, “Traces of Us,” is
now live at GigaNotoSaurus. It’s a
story about sentient spaceships and neuroscientists in love. It’s dear to my
heart for a number of reasons, and I’m so gratified by the responses it’s been
getting from readers. (Writer and critic Charles Payseur has an absolutely beautiful review--with spoilers!--here)
The story is grounded in some very
real science. I'd like to talk a little about that scientific grounding,
and the inspirations (both scientific and not) behind this story.
SPOILERS
(I’d suggest continuing only after
finishing “Traces of Us”)
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The story seed
The seed for this story came from a
feature article I read in The New York Times back in 2015,“A Dying Young Woman’s Hope in Cryonics and a Future.” It’s a beautifully written story about Kim
Suozzi, a young woman who died of brain cancer at the age of 23, but who hoped
to have her mind preserved for the future. Alongside a moving and vivid portrayal
of Suozzi and her partner, the article also provides a look into the science behind
the promise of brain preservation and “mind uploading.” It offers a clear and
accessible introduction to “connectomics”—the mapping of all neuronal
connections within the brain and what that might mean.
Intellectual credit where it’s due (or,
this is where my footnotes go because there’s no room for citations in fiction magazines)
---In my story, Kathy and Daniel argue over the plausibility of
replicating the brain in digital form. When Kathy argues
that we don't actually need to understand everything
about how our mind works to replicate it, she draws an
analogy to the recording of music.
replicating the brain in digital form. When Kathy argues
that we don't actually need to understand everything
about how our mind works to replicate it, she draws an
analogy to the recording of music.
“What if it’s like music?” she said,
waving a hand vaguely.
Music was in fact playing softly from speakers in the
next room
— a melancholy pop song with blues-like tones, something
Daniel didn’t
recognize. “You don’t need to know how a violin
works to replicate its sound.
You don’t need to know what wood
it’s made of, or how it’s strung, or anything
about timbre or
musical theory. You just need to record the sound waves. Play
them back and there! It’s like the violin is playing right in front
of you.”
of you.”
This elegant analogy was actually drawn from an
essay by
magazine (I am not smart enough to come up with this type of
analogy on my own. Much thanks to his lucid writing).
analogy on my own. Much thanks to his lucid writing).
---The details of the brain
preservation process which Kathy
undergoes were drawn from a hypothetical
scenario outlined by
neuroscience researcher Kenneth Hayworth, as detailed in
this
article in The Chronicle of Higher Education in 2012.
---I also spent on a lot of time on
the official website for the NIH
Blueprint for Neuroscience Research and the
Human
Connectome Project . Fun fact: Washington University in
St.
Louis (the unnamed institution at which Kathy and Daniel do
their graduate work)
is in fact a leader of research into the
human connectome.
Personal connections/inspirations
There are readers who may guess,
from the details of this story, that I have a personal connection to St. Louis.
Those readers would be correct. I lived there many years ago when I was attending
graduate school in biology (molecular cell biology, not neuroscience) at
Washington University in St. Louis. I met my husband, also a graduate of WashU,
in that city. In a sense, “Traces of Us” is a love letter to St. Louis and Washington
University and the time I spent there.
More thoughts
I mentioned the New York Times
article on Kim Suozzi above as the main inspiration for this story. Kim Suozzi
was a real person, and the people who loved her are real. My story is fiction, pulling
in inspirations and influences from many different places, and with completely
fictional characters. Yet I still feel something of a sense of responsibility
to Kim Suozzi.
I have been lucky enough to not
truly be affected by cancer or serious illness in my life or those of my
immediate family. There have been close calls, tangential brushes. . . Like everyone
else, I know someone who knows someone who had cancer. But I personally have
been lucky to date.
I spent a lot of time on patient
forums while researching this story. I tried as best I could to understand and
get it right. I remembered that even in times of darkness and stress, people crack
jokes and laugh with one another.
We writers may write of far futures
and impossible technologies. . . but in the end, our stories are usually rooted
in real experiences. If they are not experiences we ourselves have known, they are
experiences other real people have had. I try to always remember that. I hope my writing here reflects
this.
Finally. . .
What do I think of the science of
“mind uploading,” of digitally replicating the human mind? Like Daniel, I am a
skeptic (mainstream science also appears skeptical). But I do not rule anything out.
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